A word of advice, from someone who has worked as an editor and proofreader before: presentation is often more important than content. I liked your article, but I found myself distracted by all the formatting, spelling, and grammar mistakes. Unless it's for a creative purpose (like a poem by ee cummings, you know), writing this way distracts from your content. Using the features available on Medium, like it's automatic quotation formatter, headers, paragraph breaks, and spell check, will help the presentation a lot, and help readers see the content shine through. (Please take this as honest advice and not criticism!) I hope you keep writing and give your sentences lots of "spice"!